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University of the Arts, Philly
Joined on 2/18/08
Super cool writing! You managed to add vivid details, which amplifies your scene, without saturating it with flowery, showy writing. I can't wait for more.
Thanks UNU! I think I might remove the blood pools in the snow, at least the ones spotted around randomly (there could still be one from the vine-arms being cut through!). I Included it as I was making this story up during an IM conversation with a friend back home, and Angela Carter's "The Snow Child" popped into my mind. I was definitely influenced on the landscape by her poem, but if I want to continue adding to it, it would be detrimental to leave in that obvious an influence in the long run.
Thanks again! ^_^
That's quite good writing, you could be the next http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Robert_E._Howard minus his unhappy ending, of course. There's a new widget out there to publish your stories on, perfect for this sorta thing http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/634402 It's better than quite good, while reading, you hang on every word :)
It was a pleasure to make your acquaintance last weekend! I don't think I asked, but do you get a commission on sales? Could you PM me a link to the store, I need a low end system...
Thanks VicariousE! It was a pleasure to meet you again, too. :) And thanks for the app suggestion.
I don't make a commission, but most Best Buys in the region have either Samsung Experience Stores, or Samsung Experience Consultants working in them. You could call ahead to see what their scheduled hours are so you don't miss them.
Rats, I thought you'd get points for making a sale! Thanks, I'll check into the local BB soon... not too crazy about the prices, but it's good to have a brick and mortar place to check things out, and return to, if necessary.
That was neat.
Woah! Your writing is uncannily amazing!
So when next will I see a book from ya so I can buy it? : D
It was super awesome meet ya too at Pico Day!!
Hehe, you'd be more likely to see me selling artwork, digs! It was really great seeing you at Pico Day too! ^_^
Happy birthday, even if I might be a day off
Nice abs, reminds me of the wannabe king in Prosnorkulus, "Boom!"
Oh wait, you're not starving, are ya ?! :O
Def' not starving. And not abs either. Just... tummy. mew mew mew
stretch stretch stretch
claw claw claw
So what've you been watching or playing in your down time? I've been on a 007 binge through the 80's lately, since they were made during my *ahem formative years.
I haven't been doing much honestly. I joined Steam about a month or two ago and played some puzzle games and Borderlands - stuff like that. My friend gave me a game called Critical Mass that cost him like... $0.25 on Humble Bundle and it's been one of my favourite games so far 'cause I have to destroy things as quickly as possible.
As for movies, I've been too busy to play games, so movies have been on the back burner too. I watch Lucy the other day and that was pretty good - have you seen it?
I liked a couple of the Bonds, but for the most part he was too arrogant a character for me. Like.. he could die and would just be like... "huh".
Anyways, that's enough from meeeee
The Scarlett Johansson flick about nootropics? Nah, reminds me of another flick I saw about a year or two ago. I don't like most drugs, even the ones I take for allergies :p there's always side effects... I bet Lucy had some awful IBS lol... ah, here's the male version of Lucy http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Limitless
Liked your story, it was cool. It would fit nicely in a book. I'd be stuck in it, just not the wrong thing, but kind of like my Hotel Awesome. *Burp*
Nice legs ;).. if you're a girl, but if you're a guy... Nice legs!! Lol
please still draw
I don't know if you're still around, but I still have that art you drew for me ages ago and I still appreciate it, thank you CD.